Around the trees of the world
hide the biggest secrets
in their roots
the greatest mazes.
The light stream bursts into our eyes
shining brightly in the dark,
dark and clear blossom
of the instant, passing by our side.
The throat is never interrumped
with each scream of joy
of satisfaction of this world
of these seeks of the world.
The saphired sky
runs into the souls
waits for the second
of the treasures in the eye.
Around the lives of the world
races are run by soldiered souls
some more peacefuly
turn them into something beautiful.
lunes, enero 18, 2010
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There are some many things around the word that must be fixed.
Espero que colorees tus palabras.
Saludos,
ROBERTO: Sucede que el mundo está lleno de errores y preguntas, unos que no arreglamos y otras que simplemente nos resulta imposible lograr responder con certeza.
Excelente, ese apunte médico que le has hecho a mi último relato. La credibilidad es absolutamente necesaria, en un texto tan corto.
Gracias, Daniel.
RAUL: Como ustedes hacen con uno, sólo intento ayudar a crecer como mejores escritores! :)
"Around the lives of the world
races are run by soldiered souls
some more peacefuly
turn them into something beautiful."
this is incredible. so great esp this part, "races are run by soldiered souls"
keep it coming.
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